The Six Traits

I'm sure I stole this from someone (please let me know who to give credit to if you know who wrote this). This was something I found in my folder one day while cleaning out my homeschool closet. I loved it so much and didn't want to loose it again, that I put it up here.

1. Idea

I have plenty of information from experience and research.
I chose information I knew would answer readers' questions.
I use evidence and examples to support every single point I make--no gaps.

2. Organization

My lead gets your attention and lets you know where I'm headed.
My main idea jumps right out at you.
The whole thing is organized to help you go from point to point without ever feeling lost.
Every statement I make relates in some way to my main point.
My conclusion reinforces and supports my main point.

3. Voice

I have energy, enthusiasm, and the confidence that comes form knowing a topic well.
You can tell I like this topic.
You'll want to know more about this topic, too, once you read my paper.
I thought of my audience the whole time I was writing--and tried to answer their questions.
My voice is strong--but under control (not too funny, sarcastic, etc.)

4. Word Choice

I know the territory. The language of this topic is NOT foreign to me.
I make the meaning of every word clear. I define confusing or new words, or give examples.
I avoid jargon. But I do use technical terms if they are needed.
I avoid vague language, too: stuff that's like, you know, too vague and stuff.
The words I chose are right for my audience--first graders, high school students, scientists, the general public, or whoever.

5. Sentence Fluency

Every sentence in my paper is grammatically correct. I checked.
Sentences begin in different ways.
I use linking words (My second point... On the other hand...) to show how ideas connect.
My sentences are concise, not wordy.
You will find my writing very easy to follow.

6. Conventions and Presentation

My mechanics (spelling, punctuation, grammar) are correct. I edited this paper.
The presentation is a WOW! It will catch your eye and make key point a snap to find.
The format goes with the purpose: business letter, report, etc.
For reports, I used a title and subtitles, bullets, numbers, etc. to help break up the text and make it easy to find information.
If I used pictures or other graphics you'll see right away how they link to my writing.
If I quoted any sources, or used information from others, I cited my sources correctly and thoroughly.

Please visit Helaman's Academy's other writing and grammar web pages.

resources--grammar and writing
writing--one of Washington's 11 subjects
grammar--one of Washington's 11 subjects
Phonics--mini unit on phonics

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